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xXBlueAssassinXx has started a donation pool!
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Point Commissions are Open BUT I'll take a few at a time! I seriously need points! I only have 72 out of the 200 and some that I had :c PLEASE! I NEED SOME POINTS!

I can Draw:

:bulletpink: Sonic
:bulletpink: MLP
:bulletpink: Adventure Time
:bulletpink: Anthro
:bulletpink: Humans
:bulletpink: Chowder (if anyone remembers)
:bulletpink: Alvin and the Chipmunks (yes)
I can't Draw but will attempt:
:bulletblue: Anime (never really liked it)
:bulletblue: Pokemon (never really liked it)
:bulletblue: Regular Show (love the show but the style is KILLER!)
:bulletblue: Chibi (I can draw it but the cuteness is a bit complicated)

:bulletwhite: Outline Pen 1 or 2 characters - 5 :points:
:bulletyellow: Colored Pencil 1 or 2 characters - 10 :points:
:bulletorange: Sharpie Markers 1 or 2 characters - 15 :points:
:bulletred: For more characters any Media and anything that you have in mind - 20 :points:


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We all know what Mary-Sues are right? If not, Mary Sues are female characters that are too over powered, over sexualized, sometimes the creator themselves in the fandom, too pretty, "perfect" and etc. They're bad and they exist in both OCs and in Canons as well. Mary Sues are often paired with one canon or sometimes more than one canon and they could also be paired with an OC or multiple OCs and sometimes they're paired with both Canon and OCs. And when paired with canon(s), they sometimes do a horrible job at making their couple a possibility ... Usually there is no story to the characters, or sometime the stories don't make sense at all. Cross overs are often involved and .... sometimes the creator lacks creativity at creating multiple OCs. Get the idea?

But Onyx?! NAH! ... Could she?

This is something I have been denying. I seriously think Onyx is not a Mary-Sue... but I have been watching some rant videos, reading Mary Sue rant journals, looking at Mary-Sues themselves and I have come to the conclusion people who own Mary-Sues have a formula on what makes Mary-Sues ... Mary-Sues. 

I do not support Mary-Sues in anyway! I will admit when I was younger, yeah Onyx/Rosie was a Mary-Sue! A HUGE one too! But as I grew and started to change my OCs' looks, I started to make more, I guess "adult decisions" on who my character is, what makes her that way, how she interacts with the canons, and why she's there. But I started thinking a lot about Onyx and well ... Is she a Mary-Sue? I believe she isn't! But what do you think? She sorta follows the Mary-Sue formula! 

:bulletpink: Sad backstory
:bulletpink: Hooks up with a canon from the Archie Comics
:bulletpink: Shadow shows interest in her
:bulletpink: She gets raped (spoiler)
:bulletpink: Acts similarly as Shadow (compatibility) 
:bulletpink: A creation
:bulletpink: Immortal (by age)
:bulletpink: Dark abilities only she can use 
:bulletpink: Possibly OP 
:bulletpink: She is a weapon 
:bulletpink: Sexy appearance 
:bulletpink: Boobs

Eeeeeesssssssssssshhhhhhhhhh. I guess boobs don't apply since they are not meant to be huge. I don't wan't to use the excuse that my style is sexy and it gives off that impression ... but I do enjoy making female OCs very sexy. Over exaggerated body proportions, thin waists, big hips, strong or sometimes thin legs. UGH! My Pony OCs are probably the only OCs that are not Mary-Sue at all since all are pretty much AU (Alternate Universe) and don't interact much with the main 6 or the background 6. 

Anyway, could Onyx possibly pass as a Mary-Sue? 

Why Onyx? Well if you didn't know, Onyx is my one Sonic OC that I have worked on for years! Literally years! She is my main character, along with a few, that exists in the canon world and interacts with the gang. She's my baby ;^; and I truly believe that if by any a chance, a miracle from God, Archie SEGA or SEGA themselves were to have an opening for new character, Onyx could possibly fit! (I can only dream, right?) Not trying to say that other amazing OCs can't compare to mines, just saying if there were to be an opportunity like that, then Onyx could fit! Her story is linked with the Mobius Universe! But that's just a dream ... I do plan on making two versions to this story! The story I planned and the story that would be "SEGA" friendly.

But really, could Onyx be a Mary-Sue? If so, how? I'd like to hear your opinions and be honest! I can handle critiques :3 


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Artist | Student | Traditional Art
Puerto Rico
Hai ~!
Welcome to my profile! :heart:
It's a little sad but I'm working up on my page making it look a little nicer, more organized, and up-to-date :iconhurrhurrplz:

A Little About Myself

Floating Kawaii Hearts and Stars Divider by Pastel-BunBunFloating Kawaii Hearts and Stars Divider by Pastel-BunBunFloating Kawaii Hearts and Stars Divider by Pastel-BunBunFloating Kawaii Hearts and Stars Divider by Pastel-BunBunFloating Kawaii Hearts and Stars Divider by Pastel-BunBun

:bulletblue: My real name is Shenise but I go by many names as well. You's are more than welcome to call me by Shenie, Onyx, Blue, Snuffy and all that jazz lol. I am very approachable! Feel free to say Hi! or ask questions about my art and/or characters :) I'd love to answer any questions anyone has. I also LOVE to play video games! I've been playing video games my whole life but sadly I do not have all the games I use to own *cries* but I have been able to restore a few with the amazing PS3 and the wonderful VisualBoy Advance Emulator :3 It is so much fun! I believe in God the Father! I believe in Jesus Christ my True Savior :heart:! I'm a HUGE Sonic fan if you couldn't already tell lol. I have multiple favorite characters which the majority of them are hedgehogs. There's something about them that attracts me to them >3> *shot*
What Do I Draw?

:bulletblue: I can draw a lot of cartoons but from what I've posted in my gallery, it's mainly Sonic the Hedgehog, well more like My Sonic the Hedgehog Fan Characters lol. I lack creativity sometimes so I'll end u drawing Onyx in the same pose like 50 million times... Yeah ... It's that bad ... Eventually I draw the others but it's rare sometimes. I do have characters I have drawn but never made public :c or even made a design for them at all D: ughh I'm terrible.
I do draw many things! I draw Alvin and the chipmunks (old school design (they were much cuter that the new ones)), My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Adventure Time, Chowder, sometimes Minecraft stuff. Pretty much anything that catches my interest really! If I really like a cartoon, I'll attempt to doodle them :3 Like my new obsession Steven Universe. I drew my own FC Emerald.


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I'll put more stamps tomorrow ... There's too many .....

Enjoy My Gallery!!
Bai ~ :heart:

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smokeclaw12 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
*pokes* dangit woman
ViperCosmos Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Check your notes. :3
ShayTheHedgehog97 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Student General Artist
 Hooooola eue 
Cuanto tiempo,no?me recuerdas?:3
Y ya vi tu ultimo dibu en Inkbunny,dios,mejoraste.....muchisimo desde la ultima vez que te vi dibujar...xD

Que tal todo?echo de menos...nuestros momentos eue te acuerdas?xD jajaja x) espero que todo te vaya bien ^^
xXBlueAssassinXx Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Hola!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Claro que me recuerdo de ti! Come te atrevez a decir na cosa como esa!! 

Te gusto? AY! Que bueno :3 

Todo va bien! La escuela empezo y me atrazo un poco en hablar con mis amigos aqui! Y estoy bien determinada para termina todo los ref. de me caballitos :3 jejejej! 

Y que es de lo tuyo?
ShayTheHedgehog97 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Student General Artist
Wow,te veo alegre,jajaja x)

No se,como hacia tanto tiempo y tal...mire el sibujo y las notas y me acorde de ti,jajajha x) (que por cierto,la historia la dejamos a medias creo....x,D)me alegro de que te acuerdes de mi ;u;:heart:

Claroooo!el estilo esta genial,mejoraste muchisimo,en serio :D y tambien....le pusiste un super dat ass,no me resistia yo tampoco(? XD jajajajajaja!! Nah,pero en serio,en general tus dibujos estan genial ;D

Bueno,aqui tambien empezo,por que te crees que mi dA esta tan vacio?xD jajajaja bueno,el otro dia pude coger por unos momentos la tableta e hice un dibujo,lo subi...pero no la puedo coger casi TuT

A mi me va todo bien,con muchos trabajos de instituto y mucho estudio,pero ahi vamos xD
xXBlueAssassinXx Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student Traditional Artist

Pero como me voy a olvidar de ti! Tu eres uno de mis buenos amigos y si dejamos de hablar pero pensaba en ti !

Bueno hasta ahora sigo dibujando Ponies XD lla mismo voy a empezar a trabajar con Sonic otra vez. Es que encontré unos muchachos que critican pony ocs y me encantaría a ver a todos me ocs criticado por ellos. Te gusto el dat ass?! XD no me gusto mucho pero me encanta que te guste !

Así soy yo algunas veces. Ni quiero dibujar y me molesta! Pero sentada al frente de una computador por horas molesta. Y my creatividad es mala!!!! Algunas veces tengo buenas ideas pero bien poco! :c

Que bueno!!! :)
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NitroGoblin Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015   Digital Artist
Hey! Just a reminder that my contest you were considering entering is still open for submissions. The Deadline was extended to March 1, 2015. There is now an option between :points: and USD. Also, If we reach 50 entries by the deadline, the cash/point prizes will be doubled. We've updated all the reference sheets with full bios, and even added more ocs to the list. We hope to hear back from you. Thank you.

Art Contest Time!! [Extended Deadline]
alien500 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Feral-Queen Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hey did you get my note I don't mean to rush you. Just making sure so I know my phones not lagging on me or something.
Nickbasham01 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  New member
yo yo yo nick bash bash here you do any private work
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